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Friday, 29 May 2020

The escape

Back in the day, I had to look after the dinosaurs when they were not Extinct at least. But this day one of the dinosaurs escaped and this is how my journey began.


 One day me and my friends had an average night shift. I was keeping an eye on the dinosaurs and I noticed out of the corner of my eye dinosaurs were gone. Then I blacked out. But when I woke up the dinosaur had gotten me by the leg so I poked it in the eye and it let go and I ran for my life. While I was running for me I saw the whole town was destroyed. I was wondering why the town was destroyed and then it hit me the dinosaurs had gotten out. Then I saw a jeep going past me and I took my advantage. So I ran to that jeep and threw him out of the jeep and took the car/jeep to somewhere far away from the town.  But then I remembered. I had left my friends behind. I had to go back to the town. When I got back to the town it had not changed a bit but the only thing that had changed is that the dinosaurs had infested the whole town. I saw no sign of life but I still went to find my friends. It was smokey. So I went to the place that I thought that they would be the donut shop. But the only thing was that there were dinosaurs blocking it. That was a big problem. But I still wanted to go in because my friends are important. So I started creeping into the donut shop. The dinosaurs didn't even notice that I was creeping into the donut shop well that is what I thought at least. Then all of a sudden there was a huge raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw!  The dinosaurs had spotted me. Then there was another big raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! So I ran into the donut shop and looked for my friends. I found them under the table eating all the donuts I said come on guys we need to get out of here there are dinosaurs outside of this billidng. Then I spotted out of the corner of my eye. Someone was trying to steal my jeep so I ran to my jeep and my friend followed me. I pulled the guy out of the jeep and hopped into the jeep and my friends hopped in as well. Then one of the dinosaurs saw me and then there was a dig chomp! Then I woke in my bed. Turns out it was all a dream.




The end

1 comment:

  1. Sup Thomas,
    That story was just the most funnyesit I had read in my life. I like how you said about the donuts when you were about to be eaten alive! I’ve never wrote a funny story before, but I think that I’m going to learn to write funny storys like yours!I don’t think there is many things to correct. But you should look at your puntuation, where you need to put commas. The main thing is, your story really made me luagh my head off. I hope you write more funny storys later!



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