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Thursday, 7 May 2020

Flesh Eating Zombie

One night at the fireworks I was in line for some churros and all a Sudden a UFO came out of nowhere. Aliens hopped out of the UFO and the UFO sucked up people. People didn't know that the ufo was sucking up other people. The aliens got a virus from space so they can eat people's flesh and turn into zombies. At first the zombies were acting normal.My dad was doing the sausages and the fireworks went off and then… “BOOM!” (that gave him a fright) . The zombies invaded. 

On stage, Hunter was doing an amazing job in his puppet show using Kermit the frog. Then a zombie snuck behind the curtain and leaped onto’ Hunter but he knew that the zombie was there. So he just put his fist near his head and the zombie fell on the floor. Hunter got a pan and whacked that zombie to death.  Then another zombie was going to jump onto Hunter but he just demolished that one too.

 In the meanwhile David was eating all the churros and the UFO sucked up churros van and David was in it' when he was in the UFO he found a secret hatch and he jumped into Hunter’s hands.Hunter was relieved that David didn't die .

I was ready for this moment . Although I thought it was going to be a zombie apocalypse, aliens got a virus from the space apocalypse. Anyway, it all comes down to this:’ this is the big fight between me and the big boss zombie. I had a blow-up sword and blow-up armour. So I tried to cut his neck off but my sword popped. I saw a kid who had the same blow-up sword as me. So I ran to that kid and I snatched it off that kid and sliced his brain into shreds. (Don’t worry I'll give that kid another blow-up sword). Luckily no one was injured in that tragedy. Everyone lived happily ever after.

5 comments:

  1. Kia ora Thomas. This is a very fast paced story and thank goodness it has a happy ending! Who is David? Do you write many stories with a zombie theme?

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  2. Wooo, Thomas. I feel tired just reading your story. I love the way you have used the brackets to give extra information to your readers!

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  3. Hi Thomas this is Scott. I think your story starter is very good. I like zombie stories as well. Take care to make sure you're not missing any words out.

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  4. Hi Thomas It’s Kade. I like how you added your friends in. Your story was great.I like how the Zombies are in a UFO instead of aliens. Maybe add more info from how hunter got the pan.

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