The next day they arrived at my doorstep. I opened the door and saw the box and I saw the biscuits. They looked like any other biscuits, but just a little bit bigger. I got the biscuits and put them in the dog bowl and headed to the kitchen to make some breakfast because it was the morning.
After breakfast I looked in the dog bowl to see if my dogs had eaten them yet and when I looked, they were all gone. I went to go find my dogs. I went to the back door and opened it and my dogs had grown. At first I was wondering what happened and then I remembered the biscuits were magic so I was proved wrong. I was so astonished I didn't even move. When I finally moved I was still very astonished that my dogs had grown. So I had to get them more food because they were so big.
When I got the food my dogs had shrunken. Was I hallucinating I don’t know. So when I went to bed that night I was worried about my dogs. When I woke up my dogs were barking. I went to check them and they were just normal. Nothing had happened to my dogs. I was expecting them to have really big feet or big heads but nothing happened. I was thinking it was all over and I was right. Because that very night I went to sleep and the next morning my dogs were not barking and they were not big or small. Boy was I happy.
The end
i like your story its very cool you should me a part 2! what are the dogs names? what colour are they? what market did you buy the magic biscuits from? maybe if you do a part 2 you can say the dogs.
ReplyDeleteHi I’m Ronan your story is really good. I like the person who played as a mum.That reminds me of my dog. My dog likes to eat biscuits too. How did you come up with the idea for your story?
ReplyDeleteHi Thomas
ReplyDeleteI like it how you added hallucinating. I have a dog do you have one.Try adding some more speech marks.