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Tuesday, 10 August 2021

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They had always been together, for as long as he could remember. They had always been the best of friends. She had taught him everything he knew, relentlessly preparing him for life in the outside world..

This was the moment they had both been waiting for...





I was with her for 10 year she taught me everything I know about the outside world. It was time for her to let go. She let me out of my leash but then she said “Come with me I need to show you where you are going stay” 

We were walking for a month of Sundays. It had been one hour of walking then we got there. It was paradise . There was also a tower of giraffe. There were trees so many trees that I could munch on. There was a fresh water as well. I was happy as a child on Christmas day. Then I had to let go of her, the person that taught me everything. I said goodbye and so did she as well. I was crying but I think she was as well. My heart sunk like rock in the river when she left. I was hunger and took a bite of the grass it was as sweet as sugar. Then I when to sleep.

Me and my class are doing quick writes, thing one we were working on similes.




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