Thursday, 30 July 2020
The Storm
The storm
The storm is a angry bull,
Dangerous and destructive.
It charges and stumbles across the land,
Like a stomping elephant.
The air rumbles with it feet,
It thombs the air and rips down the house.
With its feet it stamps on the ground,
It does not care about anything.
Crashing raging and stamping,
Clumsy, wild and furious.
1 comment:
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hi,Thomas I like your poem it's very interesting! But I think you can improve by, like The air rumbles with it feet, it is suppose to be " The air rumbles with it's feet.
ReplyDelete